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did this with some spare time (not really spare but i like to procrastinate) what people think... opinions would be MUCH appreciated

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I'm not good at critique, but since you asked and I passed this by I thought I'd at least say what little that seems odd, though it may be part of what you wanted. The expression on the face is kinda 'huh?' looking, that's the best I can explain. Otherwise I personally find it quite cool looking.
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Thanks alot man..i actually didnt expect to get any comments at all :dance: :boogie: .. i think the face needs some work..I didnt actually realize it looked that way till you mentioned it..think i need some character development :plotting:

Cheers
Kyle :smooch:
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you can add some reflection in the eyes since the light source seems to be projecting on the person. usually there will be reflection on the edges as well, the cap and the windbreaker.

i like the background, the silhouette of the buildings, the details and the choice of a purple sky. there is symmetry and balance in the composition but the way you framed your work is rather odd. a simple rectangle frame (with or without rounded edges) should do the trick.
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Thanks alot man.
I'm going to do what you've said. I dont really like the border myself.

Cheers
Kyle :dance:

--
If i was to be Killed
And all of my blood spilled
Would anyone care
Would the church be filled
Or would i be forgotten
My life have been for nothing
Just a random guy dead
Laid to rest in his coffin

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